Tuesday 1 April 2014

The Tidy Upper Machine

It cleans up your room. It does all your room. It does everything for you. It does all your chores for you. You don't need to ask it to clean up your room. It is very expensive. It costs a lot of money to buy it.
Everyone would get one because it is very intelligent and smart everyday it will get cleaned up. You will all want to use it. it is good for everyone in the family. People would love to buy it, so what are you waiting for! Come and get it.
It will pick up your old, yucky, dirty room for you everyone would want one.
Everyday and every night when your room is clean.
It just tidies up without asking it and no one would need to ask for help. He will say no because you can turn it on fast or slow. So come along and get it. it is for 100 dollars everyone would want one.

it can do anything for you. It cleans up your house. It is 100 dollars.

4 comments:

  1. Cayden you are working diligently to get more and more ideas in your writing. You can be very proud of the work that you are producing.

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  2. That is an awesome writing piece, you are trying so hard. Keep up the great effort. Mum.

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  3. Great work, good attitude to learning and good to see you working hard. - Brent.

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  4. That is an awesome writing piece, you are trying so hard. Keep up the great effort. Mum.

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